seeing me crying
shackled by heavy burdens
your greatest pleasure
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Deeply thoughtful
To think that some treat others this way is most difficult to understand or grasp, but your words ring with truth. Hopefully this is not you, if so, your freedom will arrive soon.
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I know what you're saying here. As soon as I read it I was shaking my head saying, that's me right now. It's like you might have done something to someone they didn't like and seemed fine with it but then the tables turn and they do the same thing to you so you can see how they felt. They want you to feel the same way they did, they think that its justified somehow that way. Well, it's not. Who knows if they can ever see that though. Thought provoking, Duana. Love the haiku form
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Deep. That someone watches you cry and take pleasure in it.Almost as if they want you, to feel pain because they are hurting.They want you to feel the pain that they feel.And your crying bring some type of enjoyment, almost like a high to them. Deep.Good write and very interesting.
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yeah, right, or they love watching you have to feel the pain they feel, and don't have to feel themselves. There are a hundred interpretions.
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