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Notebook Poem #1 "Shaman's Forest"

Shaman's endless forest cries,
No arrow points the way
Its a three days journey from the village
Three days of darkness
Light hides in muted lands
The Fant Sound of a lonely drum is the only noise.

Screaming, creamy creeps laugh in the face of reality,
Doorways lead to nowhere out here.
Rocks piled by unknown beings,
And help is spelled out everwhere but nowhere.

"True insanity lies in the wood."

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  • Lowell Poe
    June 9, 2007

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    WOW!

    Very frantic and surreal felt like i climbed into somthing.Like somthing was really happening as i was reading it.It was like instability was gaining strength.
    Great read. I would say..Exciting.

    LOWELL POE