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I Wonder

In mystery I wander
Wrapped in the misty haze
Of my labyrinthine mind
Never ceasing motion
Diving into curiosity’s ghetto
Ever looking through a cloudy window
Reaching and searching, still wondering am I

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  • A Murderous Lament
    May 8, 2007
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    I liked this. I like the sophistication yet simplicity in it Great job.

    A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33


  • Hells Bells
    May 5, 2007

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    I never really liked short poems but this one I really like. It may be short but it actually proves a point about how you wonder.


    • willowprincess
      May 5, 2007
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      thanks. i tried to capture what this is in so few words. i hope i've succeeded.