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Broken Boy

Born a Bent and Broken Boy,
The Bastards don’t Believe,
In the Benevolence of his Being.

But a Beautiful Broad,
Came in Belated fashion,
To Break the trend of Broken promises,
And Boost his Body and pride,
Into a Brash Boldness,
Of Boastful confidence.

With a Backbone of steel,
He Bravely Braces for the Blow,
And defies the Beasts and Brutes,
Who have obsessed over the Bane of his Breath.
The Beggared Boy triumphs,
And the Beauty and he,
Believe in the Bountiful love,
Of a world Bearing Broken dreams,
Because they have seen,
The Bravura and Brawn,
Needed to Bury the Breakdown,
That comes with this Biting and Burning life.

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  • BlackRabbit9x
    May 7, 2007
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    I loved it!!
    It flowed and it was a very profound message!!


  • MoonlightBeam
    May 5, 2007
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    wow

    awesome, this is really awesome. I love it, wow!