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Melted

That one single second-
when I saw you
time stopped,
We smiled at eachother-
I felt like crying some more
You melted my heart

I saw you for that second time,
we smiled again
I wanted to run and kiss you,
but we all know that wouldn't be right
You're probably with your new girl
at this very moment, thinking of me

Our lives are so twisted,
I love you, but for some reason, I can't possibly have you
I know you love me too
Come get me!
Come to me!
Chase after me!
Tell me you love me!

That moment I saw you, that's what I thought,
I kept looking back for you to tell me anything,
say anything,
No

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{c} 2007

Hannah Duffin

{All Rights Reserved}

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  • piccola silver member
    June 1, 2007

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    This is really gorgeous. I love the beginning and the end and the middle LOL. great job. I found it by accident and am glad I did.


    • starXcrossedxlover
      June 1, 2007
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      YAY! I'm so glad you liked it. well, idk, i think this is one of my worst ones lol. but i guess you may think differantly? haha