Hold me
under the stars,
Tell me everything
to make me feel okay
Help me
through all the pain,
Do everything in your power
to make things alright
Love me
every single second of our lives,
Say what counts
to make me love you
Kiss me
every place we go,
Whisper in my ear
to make me feel loved
Copyright
{c} 2007
Hannah Duffin
{All Rights Reserved}
Author notes
Hmm, I know how I wrote this, this is things I wish every guy would do, but there are so many jerks around that it makes it hard to trust the special ones. Well, I hope you liked it
How can you relate to me?
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Love can feel this way, they do say that it takes a lot of frogs to find your prince! I truly beleive in fate and that somewhere out there is the one who is meant to be with us the ying for our yang! This was written from the heart with such emotion. Very well penned! Hugs, Kelly
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Yea, I've heard that, ha ha. Someday that'll happen (I hope)but for now, it's great writing topics! Ha ha, best of luck and thanks for the comments!
-HD
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Love is everything -- very well written.
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