If the world was made of chocolate,
I would wish to be its Godzilla.
Though I might make someone upset,
As I gorge my way past Manilla.
The world would really be
"Like a box of chocolates".
Even so, I have to agree,
I would have some regrets.
Being a slow-moving giant,
It may come as no surprise,
That no matter how defiant,
I'd accumulate massive thighs!
Maybe I won't wish the earth
Was pure chocolate bliss.
To keep a smaller girth,
I'll keep the world as it exists.
Author notes
As for best poem...I couldn't decide, and I'm feeling in a silly mood, so I picked this one. It may cost me, but my brain is a little fried, since during noon B (which is about 30 minutes) I spent the WHOLE time going around and around in a library chair, reading and spinning at the same time! Surprisingly, I didn't fall over when I got up. Maybe I just lost brain cells to keep balance...who knows?! Also going around and around, I had a sudden urge to burst out laughing. If people didn't think I was strange, I bet they would now! (If they were in the library at the same time!) Well, on with the rest of the nothes! Wouldn't it be really fun if the world was made of chocolate? I love chocolate...especially dark chocolate. Nice picture, by the way. Yes, I also took a quote from Forest Gump. (part of the quote) Great movie! Hope you liked my chocolate-insighted poem! For picture #1, if you didn't know. http://www.beakerst.shutterchance.com/photoblog/3316.htm
A contest entry
- Fun Time For Rhyme - Picture Inspired. by passim.
1000 points, ended May 18, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For all of my past contest-winners... by WhollySurrendered.
475 points, ended August 5, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please feel free to comment on what you want. If that means telling me your favorite kind of chocolate, yell it out!
Comments
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I personally prefer dark chocolate myself.
haha.
very sill poem. thanks for entering and good luck. -
Congrats on HM
and yay the Pins were pipped at the post after all 
Lifting ban on chocolate now so dig in...
Linda
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Well you certainly took on my request for fun/silly stuff and did very well with it. My only tiny, tiny criticism, if I may, is that the flow was a little bit jerky. For example, the syllables in the second line would flow better if it read 'I would be the world's Godzilla' bUt I love your poem and I am so pleased that you entered my contest.
Pat
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Godzilla in Manilla
gaining giant thighs
Pins attack so can't be slack
Or they may win the prize
Come over to my change room
I have costume just for you
Chain mail anti pin prick suit
From size 12 through 52
Recluse hands Tiger a candy bar while chocolate unavailabe
Best of luck in the contest
Linda
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