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My best friend is gone

My best friend means the world to me
we always did everything together
sleepovers that lasted all night
pigging out on junk watching movies
going for walks and telling each other everything
and even the occasional fight
I was always just a few steps away from her house

Her name is Shea
and we used to have so much fun
talking about boys, laughing, singing, playing truth or dare
we've been friends since forever
But now she's gone
my best friend is gone

why did you have to move so far away
my heart brakes everyday
thinking about you and all the fun your having up there without me
wondering if you miss me as much as i miss you
and if they are better friends than i was

oh god Shea you don't know how much i need you back here
I need someone to talk to again
someone to tell my deepest darkest secret
now what am i supossed to do ?

BFFELULAS SHEA forever <3 you will never be forgotten =)

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I miss my friends Shea so much, like you don't even know, my life is much harder without her

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  • Scrunter
    July 3, 2007

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    You've really expressed yourself well here. It is always sad when a close friend moves away and you feel you've got no-one like them. A good write full of real emotions.

    Good luck and thnk you for entering.


  • moment liver
    June 11, 2007
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    awwww, , life sucks without a friend to help you through the knee deep shit called "life".


    • The Hardest Goodbye
      October 3, 2008
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      Yeaa. Omg. Im a million times sorry ive tooken over a year to reply. I guess i never did it before, but i got in the habbit of it now xD Im glad you liked my poem about losing my best friend Thank. You.


  • DarkEmptySoul13
    May 6, 2007
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    special :P

    aaw this is soo sweet. wow.. keep writing.. i love this poem a lot


  • XChrisUnknownX
    May 5, 2007

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    Aha

    I like the way this is written simply because it expresses how deeply the loss effected you by adding some of the simple memories the two of you shared. Wonderful write.


  • Atrophya
    May 5, 2007

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    tell it to me? lol. i know that takes time and trust hun so it's okay. i love you and i know what that's like but don't worry, good friends will keep coming in your life. don't worry, im sure she misses you too. great write, as always, i love it oh soo much!! =]


  • MarimbaMiss
    May 5, 2007
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    im sorry for your loss it is relfected very will in this peice


  • Shining for You
    May 5, 2007

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    verygood

    This is very sad but i bet she misses you just as much.
    Its so hard to move away and try to start over again.
    After having such a great friend like you.good luck

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