Simplicity ill becomes the flower;
It idly sits to be pondered, dreaming
Of other flowers, perhaps, or maybe
Dreams of sun – and rain, even as it
Lazily waves to me,
As I sit pondering the whimsy loves
Of flowers.
Author notes
myeah...simple, yes. kinda long the same lines as my other kids poem.
Please tell me what you think
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awsome poem i love your work and i love mature too feel free to check out my page
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nice.. it seems ur very fascinated with natures beauty and cycle..
well i tend to mix the ugly with beauty in nature most the time or relate it to myslef or to sum1..
its notkiddi but yah simple and i like the simplicty, that makes it special in some way.. well gracie hope to see u mnore often
regards
abuyi
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This is very pretty, and the thought lovely. It is nice to daydream, and flowers are nice to look at while doing that. Nicely done my dear.



