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Flowers

Simplicity ill becomes the flower;
It idly sits to be pondered, dreaming
Of other flowers, perhaps, or maybe
Dreams of sun – and rain, even as it
Lazily waves to me,
As I sit pondering the whimsy loves
Of flowers.

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myeah...simple, yes. kinda long the same lines as my other kids poem.

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  • Jessica Lyndsay
    June 1, 2007
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    awsome poem i love your work and i love mature too feel free to check out my page


  • abuyi
    May 24, 2007

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    nice.. it seems ur very fascinated with natures beauty and cycle..
    well i tend to mix the ugly with beauty in nature most the time or relate it to myslef or to sum1..
    its notkiddi but yah simple and i like the simplicty, that makes it special in some way.. well gracie hope to see u mnore often

    regards
    abuyi


  • azure85 gold member
    May 5, 2007

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    This is very pretty, and the thought lovely. It is nice to daydream, and flowers are nice to look at while doing that. Nicely done my dear.