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Constant Reminder

In spring when the forests shine,
I wanted to show you my secret spot
--I was working on telling you
A place where seasons never change,
But are always changing
Where gold gilded black wings
Leave feathers--everywhere,
A secret place,
A sacred place,
Only where my soul is found...

You left me with my soul emerging,
I was waiting to tell you...
You left me with green leaves as our melody
I'm not who you think I am
But I wanted to be
I lied, and the lie killed me, even before
You tried

Dreams have started springing
Here and there,
Like tiny saplings likely to grow
Into large forests
Unless I kill them with the shadows of my wood

In autumn we made a promise,
But my promise was not only to you
I swore I would always
Trust you, love you
I find I do it anyway, though I must remind myself
Constantly
That I still love you
And I'm sorry

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You know who you are.

( I was logged in as my sister ( turns out it was my sister ) and posted this under her name. It's mine, no worries folks. )

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  • Meh
    November 15, 2007
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    Beautiful

    As always, you are a wonder with words.


  • NightSkyGirl
    May 26, 2007

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    Hey, I really liked this poem. Beautiful and sad. My favorite lines were:
    "You left me with my soul emerging,
    I was waiting to tell you...
    You left me with green leaves as our melody
    I'm not who you think I am"
    Good write.