WOMAN:We see for the first time, both fall into trances,
Eyes meets yours, yours meet mine an exchange of glances,
Never in a lifetime have we felt something like this,
Rage all over, anger tingling, with slightest hint of bliss,
Urge to rip you into shreads and yet with you share a kiss,
ECHO:Its a wild exchange of passion, a mixed sensation, when haters scorn and struggle, and lovers kiss and cuddle, express everything within until nothing remains, these lovers and haters are one and the same.
MAN: Breathe in, Breathe out a battle within
love hate love hate the latter succeeds
But still...can't help but feel that yearning tingling...
Tis' a yearning not to scorn but to cling with and plead..
alas, never! Pride is too strong there's dignity to with hold!
Rather live in malicious hate, than explore a burning desire untold..
ECHO:Its a wild exchange of passion, a mixed sensation, when haters scorn and struggle, and lovers kiss and cuddle, express everything within until nothing remains, these lovers and haters are one and the same.
BOTH: Eyes stay fixed on each other, accompanied by rising tension
Bodies show the slightest fidget, attempt to conceal burning passion
exchange of words ,harsh and cold, making each other angrier,
but growing hotter inside.
growing silent, growing quiet, just want to leave now and hide..
for fear of yielding to the sexual temptation, that wells up inside.
She says something outrageous...
He does something even worse...
He raises his hand, hits her with slight force
She screams in rage charges at him, repeatedly over and over...
yet fumbling,
He tries to gain hold of her till the both come tumbling,
down to the ground,
down to the earth,
Both failures, both weaklings to their sexual temptation.
Hands fondling, mouths roaming. A song of gasps
As the heat grows..so does the love and hatred.
So unbearable .yet so pleasurable..this amazing heat.
Oh who knew our forbidden fruit could be this sweet.
I love you , i hate you.
I hate you, i love you.
What we have is quite unique...
ECHO:Its a wild exchange of passion, a mixed sensation, when haters scorn and struggle, and lovers kiss and cuddle, express everything within until nothing remains, these lovers and haters are one and the same.
(THE END)
A contest entry
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Comments
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Well done, this got across quite the message and a good point. I liked it.
<3BeautifulDisaster9 -
this is really good and i definatly agreed i actually tried to write a piece on love and hate but it definatly didn't come out as good as this
thanks for entering
keep writting
dani

