At Night,
Each and every Night,
I look to
The Moon and Stars
With hopes Naive
You'll see the same
Bright shapes
Of the vast Nightscape
With hopes Indomitable
They will relay
My Soft-spoken Sweet-nothings
Each and Every Night
With hopes Undying
Author notes
Option 1, Prewrite
A poem about being a world away from the one you love
A contest entry
- It;s A Love Type Of Thing by paintitblack1001.
300 points, ended June 12, 2007, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Lovely Options by DrownInImperfection.
1200 points, ended July 16, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is so romantic...i love it! good luck in the contest
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very short and sweet I liked it. Good job keep writing.
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this is nice, but i think you could have put to sentences together as in insted of putting "I look to/The Moon and Stars" it could have been "I looked to the moon and Stars"
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Oh wow, I love this poem and can relate. My boyfriend is far from me right now...hopefully not for very long. But I have done the same thing, I stare out into the night at the moon and almost pray that he sees it to, at the same time. It would make you feel connected. But wonder write, hope to see more from you. Goodluck.
Autumn
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