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Blood Silk

Banner of blood-red silk
and eyes of the same hue:
the third Uchiha lives-
only to kill the other two.
A paper fan,
the Sharingan,
define what once she knew.
Who hurt my soul
those years ago?
Broken
bleeding
yet alive and leading
kunai tip to rest
in the flesh of my brothers
torn
confused
mistreated and abused
in spirit, fire, and fan
I shall avenge my clan
when blood has spilled blood
and the ocean runs red
and our bodies form the tamoe
in the center.

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  • Siby Anan
    August 22, 2007

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    A work of art. Stories lie behind every sentence and every line break of this poem. Stories so gruesome and insane that no one but Aya Uchiha knows them o__o


    • Chibi-chan
      August 24, 2007
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      Aya: Meaning me, or Chibi?
      Chibi: *shivers* Am I that bloodthirsty?
      Aya: I dunno...I haven't told you my whole saga yet.


      • Siby Anan
        August 24, 2007
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        Aya Uchiha, because she's the one that's telling the story...right? XD

        • Chibi-chan
          August 25, 2007
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          Aya: ...I love my name.
          Chibi: ??! That was random...
          Aya: I know secrets so dark that Itachi doesn't know them...
          Chibi: I know truths so deep a Juunishi can't comprehend them...
          Aya: *laughs coldly* You mean love? Your ultimate weakness?
          Chibi: It's also my greatest strength. That's Naruto's strength, Aya: he's willing to fight against Sasuke, who believes his love is a weakness, to bring him back. And he's doing out of his brotherly love: his greatest strength and yet his greatest weakness. *huggles self* This kind of deep theme is why I love Naruto...
          Siena: Chibi's right, Aya-san. Our steel, as Juunishi, is unbreakable, unbendable, and our spirits are conditioned to withstand the cruelest torture. But the one thing that we cannot overcome, and that we will never overcome until our souls are replaced with steel, is the power of love.
          Aya: Love is a weakness! It allows an enemy to penetrate, to wound!
          Siena: True. But when the wounds come, the indominable strength follows. Not even YOU, Juunishi you may be, can hold your ground against one who loves, TRULY loves.
          Chibi: You speak as though you've loved, Siena.
          Siena: *simply* I saved Atlantis, the city I love, from those whom I hated. They threatened my city, and I repaid them with the blood, lightning, and steel that the Juunishi wield.
          Aya: So it's alright to love a city? *thinking of Konoha*
          Siena: Perfectly so.
          Chibi: See, that's why Aya's such a PERFECT Hokage! Cause of Siena! And all this other great stuff...like I said, she fits so PERFECTLY into Naruto it's not even funny.

          • Siby Anan
            August 27, 2007
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            Maybe you should write a proposal to Masashi Kishomoto about considering to put Aya Uchiha into the series somehow XD


  • Artemis Gem
    May 16, 2007
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    interesting.

    so dark aya, GOSH!
    megumI: NOO!!! EMO BAD!!!!
    yuuki: EMO LOVE!!!
    O.O

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