The constant staccato
The heavy breeze.
The sky releases.
Nirvana to me
is Lighting, Thunder,
a book, and tea.
A walk in those drops
cleanses my need.
It feels as though
The sky, like me
Must let it out
Needs to be freed
Author notes
Rain is just amazing to me, it makes me feel so calm and relaxed. I don't know what else to say
A contest entry
- Contest about Finding Connection to Nature by ChemicalArtemis.
425 points, ended May 7, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Rain. Rain. Rain. by rosie4491.
450 points, ended August 7, 2008, 33 entries
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Comments
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Short. Sweet. Dramatic. Enthusiastic. PERFECT. Wonderful pen! Thank you. BEST of luck.
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You are not the only one here who loves the rain. And you have captured the essence of feeling that rain inspires, at least how I feel it. You have captured the gentle chaos of rain, the storm of a few soft drops. Your word choice really helped convey the feelings in a very powerful way. This is a work of art, and a display of your fine talent. Amazing.
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Beautiful
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