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Entwining Hearts

The world has many evils,

Death, pain and jealousy.

They come to take the light from life,

And leave you standing cold.

 

You live through life,

With the devil on your back.

Waiting to spot your weakness,

Then leaping out and striking.

 

You come out shivering,

The world has passed to darkness.

You can not find a way to escape,

Your lost in the mist of misery.

 

Food has lost it's taste,

The good things have flown away.

The tunnel continues, no end.

Your caught in the claws of death.

 

As evil comes to take you,

To the point of no return.

A light flickers in the distance.

Drives back the blackness.

 

A path is layed before you,

You can see the world again.

The life is full of love once more,

And the light shines about you,

That light is me.

 

So take my hand and hold on tight,

Together we can be strong.

Brave the thunder and the stormy seas,

Drive out the dark, bring out the sun.

And even when I am gone.

And all you have is a memory.

Remember the warm touch on your hand. 

Remember the feeling,

Of my heart entwined with yours.

 

Author notes

For all my friends! I love you all loads! I'm always here for you and you will always be not in my mind but in my heart.

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  • Scrunter
    July 4, 2007

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    A truly emotional write you have penned here and a wonderful dedication piece to all of your friends. Your friends are lucky to have a friend like you. This was a pleasure to read.

    Good luck and thank you for entering.


  • Darkened Seraph
    May 5, 2007

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    Brilliant hannah, absolutly brilliant, this poem has a fantastic flow and full of emotion, i like this lots especially as i know youre always there for me, i feel like i have people who care for me in this horrible world, the poem has really deep and dark imagery to the end which is brilliant it really is, i like this lots i really do. well done for writing yet another perfect poem BIG


  • eyesofanangel524
    May 5, 2007

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    Beautifully said. There is nothing i can add to this or take away. You have done a beautiful job with this. The lives you have touched are greater for you are part of them.


  • pixieland
    May 5, 2007

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    Wow!

    That is amazing!!!! It's so sweet and nice, thankyou! That is really touching and lovely - a great poem! and it means a lot too!


  • kelbornro
    May 5, 2007

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    Truly Beautiful!

    An amazing poem, my friend filled with love and passion. Im glad to have a light like you protecting me.

    This was so brilliant and flowed really well, it brought a tear to my eye, but i loved it. Im proud to be a heart entwined

    Shower you with roses

    keep writing and i will read as always

    Kelbornro

    Ps *hugs*

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