Clouding embraces
Raining moon shines
Weaving sea waves
Breezy environs
Raging fire in inner soul
Ringing thoughts of spring
Shivering stalks of winter
Colouring fall leaves of autumn
Make me shine as a love bird
waiting for the humanistic woman
dropping down before me some day from HEAVEN
like an angel ambassador professing beauty tips
Author notes
A lava surging from heart of hearts
A contest entry
- 3rd and final round Poetic X Factor!!!!! by Laura.
1000 points, ended May 14, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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hummmm i read this twice and i have to say the imagery is amazing very well done to you and good luck in the contest xxx
laura xxx -
Oh, what a beautiful piece
of writing...I have fallen
in love with the gentle
sensuality of your words...
Love, Lane
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Wonderful
Purush you have penned a wonderful poem with beautiful expression. Good imagery, nice flow. I like Shivering thoughts of winter and the other comments of the Seasons. Good luck in the contest.
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katie
thank you for your good words
purush
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Beautiful. So sensual. You have penned an awesome write. Well done.
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