Friendship is but a journey
Come on I want you to come with me.
Friends can never leave you and flee.
Let the hue of my love color you
I've brought you a world entirely new.
So many evils are moving around us
Still earth is the nicest place if we give our bondage a chance.
Don't please leave me and go away
Love can really find a way
Baby please do stay
Otherwise take me away.
A contest entry
- I dont want to be alone, take me with you by eyesofanangel524.
900 points, ended May 19, 2007, 16 entries
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Now, I can relate to this kind of bondage. Friendship is truly a journey and life can provide some wonderful surprises.
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Yes, you are right life can provide a bunch of surprises through friends. however, thaks a lot for reading and commenting.
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Very nice. Friendships forged are worth their weight in gold. Comfort us when we need them the most and then bring us laughter when we just need to be silly. The last stanza hit home. Thank you for your entry and best of luck to you in the contest. Dawn
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Thanks a lot for reading and commenting. You are right friendship soothes us when we need it most.
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Wish you all the best in the contest. Friendship is such a nice thing. Yesterday I have got heartfelt chat with one of my friend who met me after a long time. Hours passed like minutes and all the time in the world is not sufficient to recollect the memories..The mischiefs we have done in the college..We are very mischievous bunch of guys during college days and lecturers used to think twice before stepping into our class..oh! wonderful days
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Thanks a lot dada for reading and commenting. Friends really share a strong bond among them and when two old friends meet old days come back in the chariot of memory.
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Don't please leave me and go away
Love can really find a way
Baby please do stay
Otherwise take me away.
indeed very much powerful thought you have knitted in these few lines. do you willingly use Don't before please??nice work.
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