Verse 1
I am lost without you
I need you here with me
You are the one who gets me through
Verse 2
I know you'll never let me go
And I have fallen in love with you
With you
Chorus
I need you on the rainy days
I need you to make the sunshine sing
I need you, I need you
I need you here to make me happy
I need you to chase away the gloom
I need you, I need you
I need you
Author notes
i wrote this when i was about 11... its a fairly happy song that expresses how much i need this someone and want them near me... except that it's not personal... um yea. hope you liked it
A contest entry
- Write a Song! by Natelystious.
450 points, ended May 10, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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AWe, this is so sweet, and it's so good to read something from you. It's been forever girl! What you been up to? I hope all has been good, write me soon.
I really loved this, it kind of tugged at my heart! A lovely and tender write! Bravo!!!!
Michelle
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hey!!! ive been thinking about u lately, with the intention of emailing you... havent got there yet though... thanks for the comment and applause - i really appreciate it
gonna IM u shortly
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hey hun long time no see i love this
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hey thanks for the comment and applause how have you been?
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This was really cute, was really well written, ur writing has matured alot since then, but thats 2 b expected, I thought ut was adorable... plus i got an image of a mini you writing it... lol...
Great work... good 2 c ur keeping it up... lol...
Luv MDH xoxo
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hey thanks for the comment and applause
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Exceptional
Your song is exceptional, especially at age 11. Good imagery and good content. I like the ending of the song. Good luck in the contest.
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hey thanks for the comment and applause
I appreciate it
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