Upon the current of crests
in the tides of silvery memories,
the precious jewels of inventive sails
become a vision necklace to ferry my fiery surfing soul
to fancy's moons of emaciated revelatory luster.
I pause among the ruination of my illusions,
cringing at the fleeting enchantment of rainbows,
that I first sung into existence
after swimming beneath an amber waterfall of clarity,
where life refreshes in the mystery of opulent ironies.
Dancing to the renewed strength of vigorous vibrations
soaking to the bone from my induced flow of waking
a rivulet of calm drenches with a wash of self-discovery,
as I transform into a pure essence of fluid thought so freely rushing
feeling filled rather than empty.
A contest entry
- Stream Of Consciousness by polly filla.
525 points, ended May 18, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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well done for winning the silver! your rich image-packed language made this stand out, it positively sparkles. thanks again
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Thank you for the kind words and thoughtfulness.
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Wow!!
I feel this renewed sense of self after inhaling this Gem!!
Beautifully penned and Wow!
what images come to Mind~~
Thank You for sharing this Jewel
Best wishes to You in the contest!
Many blessings too
and my Love
~ Desire~*~
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Thank you darlin. You always touch with your words.
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there's a lovely swooshing sound coming off your poem. Great alliteration and assonance. Thanks for entering the contest!
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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what else could I say? Your poem's in action
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Thank you.
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