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Letterbomb

Victim: A large, strange package
came in the mail
and I'm quite sure
it's not a sale.

Neighbor: I just wake up
from my long night
and I see a destroyed home
in my sight.

Sender: I'm mad they say
but that is why
I send these bomb's
and say, "Bye, bye."

This is the first one ...there's more.

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  • Xsafety glassX
    May 6, 2007
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    u dork...applause to u


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    May 5, 2007

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    there will be more, i like this and i think this is the beginning of what looks to be a good story, keep it flowing


  • Senior09
    May 4, 2007

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    This is interesting. Message me when more comes out, I'm courious as to where this is going, lol. It kind of sounds like an Iraq bombing type of deal.

    Autumn


    • xXshadow911Xx
      May 6, 2007
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      dude/chick!howd you get that rose thing?!?and thanks to all that commented!KUDOS!!!

      • Senior09
        May 6, 2007
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        Lol, jus type * rose * without any spaces between and there ya go

        • xXshadow911Xx
          May 6, 2007
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          ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh *takes breath* hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.thanx!

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