I’m ridding my mind of the contamination
You left. [[take.your.fucking.toxic.waste.back]]
I don’t want my distorted memories of you anymore
Or that kiss that I claimed the best thing in the world
Dearie, don’t you realize it?::
I don’t give a fuck;;
Take back the scars you gave me.
This .in.fect.ion. has spread too far within me.
Leaving this horrid disease (you gave me) collapsing my
Soul [if there’s even one left].
There is no mercy for this razor.sharp demise,
We know the end has already come and past
So why bother to kiss your lips if they are already
[[Dead?]]
Oh [darling]... the blade is gleaming;;
Piercing the shattered elegance of my flesh.
Oh, [pretty baby], did you notice this dirty habit?
Oh, [ugly monster], did you even care?
I’m sick of the fucking despicable lies
The kind when I felt like nothing
Would bring the darkness back,
Like I knew I would never be numb again.
I remember pleading the mirror to show me
What beautiful pain really was.
When I wished that I felt lovely enough for you;;
Or that I could stop giving you the disgrace
.::You never even asked for::.
But baby, you sent me like I was on speed
Straight through the sweet suicide rain.
And now I fucking hate you for finally
Killing me off with that toyXheartXpaintedXred.
Your words are no longer mes mer iz ing.
Each self-inflicted wound is only a minor version
Of how much you really fucking hurt me
Don’t fool yourself with little “white lies” that go::
He said, she said, he did, she did.
All I wanted you to know is that the
Drops of agony are washing away,
Clearing away the toxic waste
But, you know, I say clean up your own shit...
I’m ridding my mind of the contamination
You left. [[take.your.fucking.toxic.waste.back]]
I don’t want my distorted memories of you anymore
Or that kiss that I claimed the best thing in the world
Dearie, don’t you realize it?::
I don’t give a fuck;;
Take back the scars you gave me.
Author notes
[Stage fright blinded my eyes]
Option 4. darling
:-)
My stupid ex..
Option #6
2- Contamination
3- Toxic
4- Infection
5- Blade
6- Darkness
7- Reflection
8- Numb
9- Shattered
10- Pleading
11- Distortion
12- Mirror
14- End
20- Disease/Diseased
21- Dreams
23- Fade/Fading
24- Demise
25- Memories
26- Razor
27- Kiss
28- Lips
29- Gleaming
30- Blood/Bleed/bled
33- Piercing
34- Scars
36- Flesh
37- Dirty
38- Dispicable
39- Disgrace/Disgraceful
40- Speed
41- Grace
43- Delicate
46- Elegance/Elegant
48- Mesmerizing
49- Pretty
50- Rain
51- Sweet
52- Lies
53- Suicide
54- Self-((add your own word))
56- Drops of agony
57- Heart beat((quicker))
60- Mercy
♥2♥ Enter your best dirty pretty prewrite. Please only enter one prewrite for this option. You can enter prewrites for the other options but you must add the option number to the prewrite. I don't mind more than one prewrite but for option 2 I do not want more than one prewrite. Blow me away with your best shot at dirty pretty, or the one that you are most proud of or won the most trophies. Basically, give me your all.
Call me b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l;; I need to hear that ((pretty)) [lie]
A contest entry
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527 points, ended May 21, 2007, 22 entries
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oh hell yeah!! this poem is the business! oh hell yeah i loved this! thank you for entering my contest and good luck!
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I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this.
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How beautiful and honest, dark and truthful. I think we all lack writing what we really feel and think inside our heads;; I thank you for sharing yours or writing in a persona as such. Well done for getting all those words in from the wordbank, I know how hard that is! ♥
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if its form wasntr p-u-t l/i/k/e tHiS
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beautiful/
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Damn!! Nicely done!! I luv it!!
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This is AMAZING.
It's exactly what I'm looking for!!
Good luck!!!!!!
Cazza
xox
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♥♥♥"We know the end has already /come\.and./past\::
So why b o t h e r to kiss your lips if they are already
[[Dead?]]"♥♥♥
This is really interesting, and surprisingly literal. I have come to expect certain things with this style, and it is intriguing to see someone break out of that mould slightly. Thank you for entering, I enjoyed reading this
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ooo and good luck in the contest!
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHH-MAZING! sarah your dirty pretty stuff is sooooo good...you are such an amazing person and he was an ass to you he doesnt deserve you and you'll find someone who is sooo much better then him...i'm so happy that your begining to move on i think im over you know who and net year will be a fresh start and non of this shit will drag us down!...great right first stanza was amazing and totally captivated me! keep writing dearie!
AnDrEa &hearts
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This is one of the best poems I've read in a while! The only problem I have is the fact that you //wro//t\\e\\ l.i.k.e t h i s. That really annoys me, but it still was a really awesome poem. Keep writing!!!
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WOw...that's really good.
I love the imagery...it keeps you captivated in it.
Well Done**
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OH MY GOSH SARH. i LOVE IT!!!! ahhh. soo good. thats the best one i have heard from you yet. and im almost positive you will win. seee i told ya you could do word banks. and urs is aweomse!!! i cant gte oevr how aweosme it is!!! I read the whole thing like 3 times cuz i loved it so much haha. and even tho u hsowed me htis lone like 10 times i still love love LOVE it.
I’m ridding my mind of the c o n t a m i n a t i o n
You left. [[take.your.fucking.toxic.waste.back]]
I don’t want my d-i-s-t-o-r-t-e-d memories of you .:anymore:.
Or that kiss that I claimed {-the best thing in the world-}
Dearie, don’t you realize it?::
I don’t give a fuck;;
Take back the scars you [gave] me.
AHHHHH. i love you dalring. keep it up and do more of this shit cuz your aweosme babe!!
M.e.g.a.n
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wow awesome write! I love it!! lol, great write, and good luck in the contest, I hope you win!!
wolf
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Great write!
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