When I close my eyes
you're what I see.
Even at two in the morning
I'm haunted by your memory
Chained to yesterdays.
Longing for your sweet love song
Giving and receiving...
United in slow motion
So long
since we've shared the pleasures
of one another's touch
To long
since your hands so steady and strong
have whispered their silkened medley
In their safari
through the valley of my desires
and into the horizon of my passion
How I need you
to touch me, feel me, love me...
You're like a smoky beat
that I can't help but sway to.
Your sweet touch sends shocks through me,
Ravaging me like a wildfire
out of control...
Caught and needing more
Loving the way you love me
Loving the way I love you.
Together we touch the colors of the sky
In our slow rhythm of bodies
Touching, feeling, moving...
Where time stands still...
Unabated
in our stormy sea of satin
Our earthly heaven...
No hurries...
Openly loving each other
Touching, feeling, moving
Nothing or no one could make this feel better.
Arching my back
Don't stop.....
Soft heated breath upon my blushing bud
Succulent, tantalizing, ravished, and seduced
Don't stop...
The smell of jasmine floods my senses
Opening my eyes to a misty morning sun
I realize
that even though you're not here beside me
You really are.
Hurry home baby
I need you like the sun needs the day
Like the rain needs a cloud
Like the night needs a dawn
Touch me, feel me, love me
Don't stop
Don't ever stop...
Author notes
I didn't do anything different to this poem..I let it ride, the way it was..
A contest entry
- Seduce me Ladies!! (CONTEST) by DeadofKnight.
525 points, ended May 13, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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DON'T STOP, INDEED!
A very seductive, sweet, sensual, tender, and loving piece - in more ways than one - to say the least! I ENJOYED this heartfelt, soulful, and beautiful poem and - If you ask me - this was worth more than an HM.
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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I enjoyed the ride while reading this. I loved every strand of word, every emotion that was expressed. A very lovely piece.
blessed be
-Blanche
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very sexy
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very sexy Dusty!
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I like the words
I love the words and I see you have talent, however it takes away from the poem when you do not use proper abrev. Throughout I think with a bit of work this is worthy of a higher trophy
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Dusty, you still have the magic touch to light up my eyes and a few things you cannot see. Absolutely great
the Satyr
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STUNNING WRITING!!!!
STUNNING WRITING HERE. IMAGERY IS OUTSTANDING AND THE FLOW IS JUST OUT OF THIS WORLD. IT IS VERY SENSUAL AND DEEPLY EMOTIONAL TOO. WELL DONE FOR THIS GREAT PIECE OF WRITING.
ALL THE BEST
WAYNE
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Thought this was very good but shy away from using cliches "sun needs the day" & "night needs the dawn". We've heard it before. But very excellent none the less. Keep up the good work!
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A wonderfully sensual write. I love the repetition of the phrase "Don't Stop" and the words touch, feel, and love in varios forms. Congratulations on trophy. Well done.
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Very nice very sensual.
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Don't you ever stop writing these. Very beautiful work. You have done a wonderful job capturing the essence of sensaulness. Thank you for this entry and good luck.
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wow that is sooo sweet
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Thank you so very very much..
Dusty
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I love this poem, it's very well written. I think that you did a great job in this piece, very seductive and I think that you have a great poem entered in this contest. I'm just wishing you the best of luck, I hope that you win, this is the best poem in my opinion.
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Thank you so very much..I truly appreciate that..
Dusty
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Dusty
This is one of my favorites of yours!! Very seductive and sensual!! Your poetry is so amazing...and your ability to call upon the senses of those that have felt the longing for someone that can not be with them at that moment is fabulous!! Great wrtie my friend! Best wishes in the contest!!
Much lvoe friend!
Shannon
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Thank you so much my friend..I appreciate you stopping by to have a look and comment..I hope all is well with you
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THE BEST POEM I READ ALL DAY.
VERY ENJOYED WRITE.
FULL OF PASSION LOTS OF LOVE, AND SEXY ALL ROLLED INTO ONE.
OUTSTANDING JOB.
MANYBLESSINGS2U & YOURS ALWASYS
JOYCE
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Thank you so very very much..I truly appreciate it..
And blessings to you and yours as well..
Dusty
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oops forgot the applause!
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Hot, sultry, and damn fine! Whew, girl! It's awfully steamy in Texas this morning
Very well done! Wish you all the best in the contest! -
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Thank you so very much. I appreciate it
Dusty
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WOW!!!
DAYAM!! This piece is SMOKIN! I think your muse is back Darlin lol. And wow is she on fire. Great sensual write...the seduction worked Good luck in the contest!
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Thanks...
You're a sweetheart...and a nifty toy 
loves ya mucho...Dusty
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woohoooooo me sis this is .. errr yea its that ... just fantastic ! ..glad to read a poem from you agen its been a while ... loves ya sis ..good luck in the contest xxx cheeky xxx
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Thanks sis..I appreciate it...Yeppers it's been a little bit since I had the writing itch...maybe it'll stay around for a little bit..
love ya bunches..Dusty
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Sweet poem Really long though.
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It really is
I don't usually do the long ones either....Go figure
Thank you so much for stopping by to read it though!!
Dusty
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Damn Dusty,
You got your muse back really, really REALLY big time! Glad to see you writting again and such a great one to boot! this one is getting bookmarked for absloute certain!
JD
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Thank you sweets..I appreciate it.
It's been a while since I've been into writing so much..Maybe It'll hang around for a minute or two
Love ya this much then some more!
Dusty
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