Seven wonder of the world,
one of them stood tall
making my head swim; never
knowing he had swept
me off my dainty feet.
While sitting in the library
lost in imagination; I was
in another world.
His fragrance breeze by
tantalizing my spirit, soul.
I felt his whiskey eyes
caressing my covered spine;
removing pieces of fine design.
Oh! the sweet radiance
jerked me back to reality.
Longing became my passion,
I winked and smiled his way
what could I say?
My reflection in his golden
eyes; beckoned the next call
my heart fluttered in tenderness.
Time came to depart
pausing as I passed; I
gave him my number then
descended the stairs
with ardent pink sigh.
Author notes
ennovy
A contest entry
- SENSUAL WHISPERS....THE ART OF SEDUCTION by Seductive Whisperer.
875 points, ended June 8, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very cool
you know how to do this right! lovely and sensual. a mile away from the Vampire series.
"I felt his whiskey eyes
caressing my covered spine;
removing pieces of fine design" love that line.
as usual great job. u should do good on the contest, good luck my friend.
~marcus
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"While sitting in the library
lost in imagination; I was
in another world.
His fragrance breeze by
tantalizing my spirit, soul."
So nicely you've penned the entire piece. The above stanza attracts me more.
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this is so cool. the library? hmmm? perhaps i shall go hang out there more often. i wish you the best of luck in this contest you have entered. viyanna rosemarie
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