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Solitude

Speaking only through the rhythms of nature
Opening my mind and closing my eyes
Letting the beat of my own heart inspire me
Indistinct thoughts filter through my dreams
Trespassing but not wholly unwanted
Until my life's last breath I strive toward this
Determined to reach my center, my om
Ecstasy in losing myself in the silence

Solitude.

Author notes

I love acrostic poems! They can be very inspiring.

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  • squirrelgirl
    March 30, 2008

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    eh? I didn't see that until I read the author notes then looked up acrostic in the dictionary. Great job with this one! This reminds me of 'The Path of the Heart' also by you. Great write. I love it!


  • A Murderous Lament
    May 5, 2007

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    Hmmm

    This is an interesting one. I liked it. Grabbed me in. GOod luck in the contest!!

    A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33


  • Senior09
    May 4, 2007

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    I like Acrostic type poems, though when I was younger I had difficulty starting them off. You did a brillant job with this. And yes I think this just might have inspired me to make a new poem, Thank you, lol. Oh and goodluck in the contest, and in life

    Autumn