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[ You bit your lip open ]

You bit your lip open
just to see what it's like
to kiss your insides

So now you know
your blood runs cold
and just as deep
as your late-night groove

iIf you had one more wish
it would be another you
so you could choke
yourself awake.

Whatever you think you are
we just might be the same
whenever you feel a fire
remember we are to blame.

You aren't a majesty
nor are you grotesque
no one loved you fully
but we like you the best.

We'll feed you daily
and we'll give you a home
I'll love you madly
and steal your bones.

He'll kiss in the morning
and touch in the night
he'll beat in the evening
he will treat you right.

Now is your chance
to take it all back
while he isn't looking
just straight in his back.

Now just like before
he will lose his head
do not take too long
now put him to bed.

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Listening to too much NIN... D:

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  • JustinCase
    May 10, 2007

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    Other than the "ilf" instead of "if" typo, I really liked it. It did start odd a lil slow but the end war real strong.