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My basis

My breath which i adore
Sweet sugar filling my ears

Devilish desire over whelms me with every note
lulling me into the melodic lullaby

The basis of nightmares, thoughts and dreams
Provocative, luscious voices scream out
in agony, joy, and pain
Fuck LSD, Ecstasy, this is my cocaine

My life is dependently balanced on the melody that fills my soul
These Lyrical lies tell my eyes what to believe
Perfection above all

This anesthetic is a way of life
This darling little incomprehensible candy

My prayer and my being
The element to the world often forgotten

Beats surge my skull

My independent salvation
Skeleton forming my fixated emotions to a new high

Never doubt this simple medication

Give up your heart, your soul, your mind.
You can skip the track unlike life
Rewind my heart's beautiful device

Music is my tourniquet

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I am music, music is me

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  • crazymomma
    August 10, 2008

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    Your love of music show strongly in your words. This is nicely written. thanks for entering and good luck


  • Blue Azure
    May 6, 2007

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    yeah.. those last lines were great. you really explained your passion well here, i enjoyed reading it. that last line was such a great ending. i love the way you compared it to a drug and showed the highs you got. thanks for entering my contest.


  • Twins 4 me
    May 4, 2007
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    Great write. I love the metaphors you used in this! I love music as well. Good luck in the contest.