She feels left out
She's all alone
She hears the voices
Howl and moan
They say she's crazy
That's she's insane
She has been
Ever since he came
He killed her dreams
And shot her down
She went along
Without a sound
There was nothing
She could do
She longed so long
For something new
Her wish came true
In the blink of an eye
She sat and watched
Her spirit die
Now she's locked up
And he runs free
For what he did
He pays no fee
Author notes
I just thought about this one and wrote it down
A contest entry
- All or nothing kids by lust in a grenade.
306 points, ended May 25, 2007, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Entrapment by babi.
800 points, ended June 11, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - So You Think You Have Soul?? by Trixie08.
300 points, ended September 2, 182 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
awww, so sad. Makes me mad because this does actually happen, people who are guilty walk free and the innocent are left to pay. It's so wrong, but that's society for you, the good people are the ones to suffer. The poem itself is so blunt, straight to the point. It has good rhythm to it and is very easy to read, it's short but tells a story. The last stanza sums up the whole piece really, very effective it knocks you and leaves you speechless but
"They say she's crazy
That's she's insane
She has been
Ever since he came"
did it for me, why has it always got to be the innocents' fault? It just doesn't make sense, she was ripped of her life and yet she gets blamed! Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest babi xxx
-
He killed her dreams
And shot her down
She went along
Without a sound
wow i like this alot its very emotional and discriptiv -
wow aaron this is really good i love it whos it about wow i didnt know you wrote this good i love the poem
-
-
nobody really i just thought it up and wrote it down
-
Adding your comment:
