Breath leaves the vibrant lungs
Reaching for the unreachable
Excitement settles in
Anticipation captivates the air supply
Taking all breath away
Holding on to knees
Leaving one silent
Loss of breath holds prisoner
Eagerly awaiting the return of
Sweet and precious oxygen
Sure to eliviate the mind
A contest entry
- ACROSTIC! by A Murderous Lament.
375 points, ended May 8, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - completely anything you want! NO RULES WHAT~SO~EVER! by ibsons hysops.
1000 points, ended May 30, 2007, 65 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i enjoyed the feel of this, as if i was gasping for air as i read through it! You r a Finalist!!! Good Luck in the Contest!!!*rose
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Wow it's so good...i was never able to quite get the hang of this style writing but you seem to have mastered it. It's a beautiful write. Very enjoyable.
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Breathless.
Perfect
Great write. I enjoyed every line and every line made perfect sense for the word "Breathless" Awesome job. Good luck in the contest and welcome to the finalists.
A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33
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