You're the one who loved it first,
Our little tragic act
Under me, you're standing now
Ruined at the fact
For your lovely sorrow has returned
And came with a leering glance
Vindicated, I now stand
Off the hook, is my romance
Round and round, your head will spin
I am the omnipotent one
The results of my hit are inviting to me
Ever since the war begun
Always used to slit my throat
But now you beg for me to stop
Only simple acts of sadism
Make you weak until you drop
I seek cruel entertainment
Nothing more or less
An honor to have made you this,
To make your life a mess
In these words, I shall confess
On how I love astounding stress
Now my work is pure success
Author notes
April 4, 2007... First acrostic! YAAAYYY... So this is about this girl... in short, I stole her boyfriend... then he went back to her... then we battled it out chick style. She told me how he meant nothing to me, and I came back at her with "Well then why did he leave you for me in the first place, eh?"... She made me want to fall off a bridge and die, and I did the same to her. We both ended up in pshycwards for destroying ourselves out of depression--- self destruction, eating disorders, etc.
Now I'm over it, and my life is going smoothly for the most part. I'm out of the pshycward, no more anorexia or self destruction.. w00t.
Over a year later... and she's NOT over it! HAHA... This poem is about how hillarious and stupid she is. She STILL wants to be in pshycwards. She's STILL "anorexic" and she keeps crying about how it's my fault!
So this is an ode to her patheticness!
I am her favorite abomination.
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I chose the acrostics option.
"I love to annoy people"
A contest entry
- ACROSTIC! by A Murderous Lament.
375 points, ended May 8, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Things I Hate. Yay! by DeadlyTurnip.
600 points, ended September 20, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You did a really nice job with this piece thank you for shairng and goodluck to you in the contest.Best wishes
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I might have to take acrostics off the list of things I hate. I'm getting some really good entries. This is by far one of the best acrostics I've ever read, thank you for entering.
And thank you for reading the rules! -
Interesting Write
ybe just a paunful romance. But it kept my interest
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Good!
Awesome job for your first acrostic I am quite impressed.
Better than mine was lol 
I love the poem as well it's got good flow and I like the theme to it. Wonderful Good luck in the contest!
A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33
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