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Skyclad Under The Night Sky

Swaying beneath the stars
Knowing today could be my last
Yielding for no one, I
Care not whether I should inhibit myself from
Life and all of the wonderous joys that it brings
Anyone that is willing to recieve them without
Distraction

Uninhibited is the one to undress when
Night settles around us
Determined am I, to feel the
Earth beneath my feet
Realizing, I may not feel it tomorrow

Taking chances today
Healing tomorrow, if there is a tomorrow
Even though, I really do not know

Never thinking that I am incapable of something
In a fight to live, I will try my best
Going beyond the pink
Horizon to achieve my goals
The goals that make my life worth living

Standing my ground, no one will overcome me
Knowledge is what has brought me this far and
Yes, it will take me further

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  • A Murderous Lament
    May 4, 2007

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    Great.

    This poem has amazing flow. I've never really read a acrostic that long but it was really great! Awesome job and good luck in the contest!!

    A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33