She's lost him in broken Valentines
Still frames, water stained, on the floor
Past lives with fake smiles
[[Memories]]
Torn in half. Torn apart.
[[Forever]]
Dear Black Goodbye...
Curl the letters
Let them fly
Tonight
Tonight
Let the letters fly free
From your signature inside his tortured mind
Right next to her memory
They fly free
She used him as paper to write her lies
Then rubed him eraser raw
[[He'sscarred]]
It burns, it throbs in his brain
[[She's lost him in broken picture frames]]
But he waited for so long
Just to hold her in his arms
And whisper 'You are my sweet girl'
And she played him for so long
Laying there in his arms
Whispering back 'Your my swwet boy
Embrace me'
She can't keep him in her mind
Forgotten memories are all thats left
They lay pulsing on the floor
Like his broken heart
Fading more each beat
Hear his heart?
[[Bump]]
[[Bump]]
[[bump...]]
Dear Black Goodbye...
She's gone.
His mind is consuming itself
Searching
But no happy memories remain to view
Only pain is left to him
Watch him squirm
Hear him scream
'I thought that she was my sweet girl'
He knows its hard
And things won't work
When you're all alone
Dear Black Goodbye...
He loved her more
He loved her more
To kill him, she lied
She said it back
She sucked his life
Sucked him dry
Led him into darkness
Calling to him
'Embrace me, I am your sweet girl...'
Author notes
Inspired by BLUE BURNS ORANGE by Hawthrne heights
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A contest entry
- Music by DepressedAngel.
2100 points, ended May 10, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make Me Love You [show me your best] by thelovesongwriter.
800 points, ended July 29, 2007, 73 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this poem is wonderful, exremly. great job on the HM in the contest. i'd love to see more of your poetry. great job keep up the good work.
-maddie
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Awesome!!!!
Super coolies
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very depressing... this is a very dark piece! great job with concieving the dark writing i enjoy.
good luck&thanks for entering
-lovesong -
thanks for entering i really like this... alot great job..Heather
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this is extremly good, i loved it, you did a great job writing it, i can almost feel it in my heart what this is saying, good luck in the contest
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