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Today

Today I wore my hair down
I remember you liked it that way
You said it remimded you of downs
But that was years from today

You said it flowed like milk and honey
That it was from the promise land
But the chemical in my body
Took everything in its hand

You stopped coming around me
You never said a word
All because there was nothing
But the bare skin on my head

That same chemical took you away
I hated it for doing so
It tore me apart
But there was nothing I could do

Five years down the road
I have hit my mark
My hair has grown long and soft
As if we were never apart

This man beside me loves me
It is the loce I once sought
And this man sitting beside me
Loved me when I had naught

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  • Twins 4 me
    May 4, 2007
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    What a beautiful write. Great emotion. I enjoyed this.