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Nature Never Provides A Boarder For Us...

Even though the line of trees seems like a boarder there is still the hallowing statue in the back ground

Nature has no boarder, we boarder nature. We steal from her, rape her, and make her bent to our will. We build with her and kill with her. She has become nothing but the poison that is dripping from our fangs. Nature is our mother, our protector, yet we the Cain of this parade are jealous of her beauty, her sweet serenity. She must fall...her Able blood now soaks the ground. We cage her...her wild flowers and crawly lizards. We try to harness her and take what isn't ours. No nature does not provide the boarder, we provide the prison. Telling her where she can or cannot grown. Destroying her with parts of herself.

An Absent Double...

Double trouble, double walls, double glass, how fast we are to forget the past. Buildings, cars,jet planes, the new technology age. Fake, unfounded, ugliness, the world is only but a stage. White so pure, the wall should be red with the blood of tainted youth. No longer appreciating life. How many pass the sunset that leaves a crack in the sky, like the doors of heaven have been exposed? They walk on passed, too trapped by the media. They aren't flower children, they are the spawn of TVs and the Internet. Cyber zombies walking around without an original thought on hand yet not a shock because this world has been dead for some time. PAY ATTENTION TO THE BIG PICTURE - When really it is the details that make the image. How dare you have the right to have eyes to see.

A Fully Reflecting Surface...

Showing nothing but the tragedies of the world. Sky scrappers how beautiful OR NOT.

Even through the glass we see the trees thinking what we see is serene. Yet behind it stands yet another building. Nature smashed in between. We can't capture it with some string and surely not in city scene.

Seeing through the glass, we live our lives caged inside, a reflexion of anything but freedom.

What do you want to be when you grow up?

-on top of the world
  -Simply of the world...

They say you can have it all, but it all has limits, you are never free.

Jealousy...

Burning sun beating upon the flesh with nature on a leash.
Even in nothingness we still have hope for others if not for ourself.

Author notes

We had to pick up pictures off the floor in poetry class and then just start writing, and after some time we traded pictures with other people, and just kept writing with different titles each time. This is what I came up with.

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  • passionate-poet
    April 11, 2008

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    i like it, i think it came out great. i could totally see the pictures you were tryin to describe! you did a fantastic job with the wording and descriptions ! thanks for sharing with the rest of us i look forward to reading more!