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I Remember...

                    let it all

      linger on my skin

          fractured

                  cigarette                          s

                      left upon my soul

                              the toxic lullaby          of

                                              empty spaces

                                      destiny...

        watched him die

                                                  unknown

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So I had a poem called dreams or memories about things that I remember, and I hated it so we did an exercise in poetry class to change it, and this is what I got, and I like this so much better.

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