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What You See Is What You Get

I forgot what we called this Place;
This figment of our minds…
All though it has never been real,
I would argue that reality is…
Nothing but imagination anyway.

We c-a-m-e Here, you and I,
To escape the world of tainted minds
“YOUR LOVE IS SINFUL”
But I say how can love be wrong…

Fields of Bleeding Hearts,
And trees that incase the sky…
Wild, laughing butterflies,
And waters from oblivion.

Even in all its serenity;
You were all I needed…
Hair flicking in the breeze,
Blue-green eyes that stole my heart,
And that smile….
Could bring Angels to their knees…

Whisper oh so softly.

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For poetry class, dedicated to Sara Kathryn.

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  • Third Orbit Mars
    May 4, 2007
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    i would argue that reality is...
    nothing but imagination anyway
    thats an awesome line. i really liked this one, it flows gently off the tongue, but lingers in the mind. one of the better pieces ive read in a while
    [itsuka ushinatte shimau no kana] red