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your loss (dedicated to Joyce)

You were so exictited
when you told me
You seem so delighted
to have a baby

You were gonna be happy
and smile all the time
...
Never expected this crappy
end of its time...

I wish you could of had it
a proud mother youd be
and godfather I, both
happy we would be

now i dont know what is happening
a million miles away
But you seem ready
to take your life away

I only hope you dont
and get to see these words
I know the pain will hurt
like a million burns

but I will always love you
and if you go I will miss
your words,your smile..
your virtual kiss

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  • Frodofan
    June 1, 2007

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    Aw. Such a sad piece, but so supportive and caring. It's really nice to read pieces like this and even better to see that the one it's dedicated has commented on it and appreciated it. The power of poetry!

    Keep writing!


  • jeii
    May 29, 2007

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    michael!!! WHY DIDNT YOU EVER TELL ME YOU WROTE THIS!?!?!?!? michael, lil bro, i love you so much. thank you for all the support you've ever have given me and in the future will give. you're the best lil bro i could ever ask for. his name was supposed to be michael riley. and you would have been the godfather. and although you're right about it hurtting so much, i also am happy that atleast my baby wouldnt have to go through the roughness of this life. but nevertheless im still on it and i'll never forget. i dont know what else to say..cause if i say more, i'll start tearing...either way i love you lil bro and thank you for everything take care of yourself...mwuah...i'll talk to you soon


  • XfaceXdownX
    May 7, 2007

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    this is really sad. i know what its like to lose a baby. its a horrible feeling. i love you a bunch.

    love brittany


  • nobodys-girl
    May 5, 2007
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    this is awesome mike...


  • Violent Serenity
    May 4, 2007

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    my dear, this is a sad write. very well written to convey feelings and passion.

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