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tied

severe finesse

pate's blinding
hardly a furrow,
ozone toned bone

beads pierce blue

your's
that hypnotize


 

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  • Nicole Hanna
    May 4, 2007
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    Oh, the final three lines are beautiful. Simple but extremely effective. "ozone toned bone" took me a bit to imagine what that would look like, but once it popped, it really worked with the rest of the piece. These abstract lines are easier to follow than I had anticipated. Thanks for entering