I stacked them high
I stacked them right
With a tiring sigh
I stacked them all night!!
Here I am still stacking
One wrong move and they fall
If I sneeze I'll send'em packing
And then I have ruined it all
Oh no I saw a weeble
Oh no, it did it again!
This high tower is feeble
Oh NO!!! Its starting to bend!!
I stacked them high
hoping they wouldn't fall
with a lonely sigh
I've ruined it all
All that hard work
from such a clever clover
He says with a small smirk
"Ill just start over"
A contest entry
- Funny Side Of Life by Twins 4 me.
1300 points, ended May 7, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything At All by Heavenly Angel.
26000 points, ended June 9, 2007, 100 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Cheer Me Up In Rhyme by piccola.
700 points, ended November 24, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is great. I can picture a kid in my mind, trying to stack these blocks as far as they can go, without falling and then after they do, just go back and do it again. I remember playing with Jingo blocks when I was little. Wow, the things that could keep us amused at a young age. Nicely done Ray. Nicely done.
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We play jingo all the time
It is kind of frustrating as are pick-up sticks. Great family activities though that can get us away from the t.v.
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very intriguing that you wrote this i think it's funny when people humour out of every day things like janga blocks lol and what not very good though
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Lol
This was very cute,
the background made it even cuter.
In all you did great.
And congrats on the HM.
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This was a cute little poem with a nice rhyme scheme , thanks for lifting my spirit for the day, I needed it .
great write
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Cute little ditty this is; thank you for sharing
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Great write! Very cute! Thanks for entering!
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Aw, how cute! I love it! "with a small smirk" lol reminds me when I was little playing with my blocks. Such a sweet poem, it made my day. Thank you. Great write, never let the pen drop...
--Darkkitty
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sweet!!! i like it. made me smirk! *smiles* it's like my son with his building blocks... oh no, they fell down. i'll just do it again! lol
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This is humorously clever! I like it a lot! Nice job!
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