In your eyes lies are freezing
I can’t face you for another day
On your lips my taste you’re keeping
And I can’t ignore being your prey
I’ve bent by the magic that I’m not bearing
With your prints you drew my way
In my voice the sound of rain drops are craving
For your devotion to caress my skin
To cuddle the passion that blasted my scars.
I remember you saying “seize the day”
But I’ve never been sure you’ll go away
And now I realized there’s no need to fray
I’ve expected someday you could never stay
By my mind I’m not stuck in this phase
By my heart I’m not lost in your love maze
And I’ll “heaven”
I’ll raise
A contest entry
- reborn by Misty Sea.
470 points, ended May 13, 2007, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Winner takes all ~ Gold for Gold # 2 by Lavender Butterfly.
300 points, ended June 8, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great imagery, superb wording. Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful piece... x Love and light, Butterfly.
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thks it was nice to hear this comment.
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10/10
when i started reading ur poetry i was frozen to the screen, as you know am a poet and so hard to be satisfied by other poets but this poem touched me deep inside , keep going sam u deserve the best -
Nice one!- many thanks for this entry to my first ever AP contest- this was beautifully written.
I liked it a lot- good luck!
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you seem impressing, hope u'll never have the chance to stop making contests, and i'll never have the will not to enter
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In my voice the sound of rain drops are craving
For your devotion to caress my skin
To cuddle the passion that blasted my scars.
loved the imagery man, u really have a gr8 style
i cant wait to read more of ur works
kepp on penning partner.
peace.
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wlak chou hal ana. i'm honored by your comments.... bass ma tsadi2 7alak
warak warak
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