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Moonlight Beauty

A wonder to be seen
As she pulls out her fan
Sister of a darkened soul
A beauty and a wonder
She is of the sand

A lovely beauty of death
Her yellow hair pulled up
Dangerous and a mystery
She moves with such precise
A lovely voice for all to hear

A mysterious past hides behind her eyes
And all you see is pain
A beauty she is
But I bet your anything
She’d ask for true love
In a swift fan flash

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  • Cube
    May 4, 2007
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    Great work, captured the personality of Temari nicely. Good job!