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No Hope For Tomorrow

Crisp leaves fall
As the wind blows
Through minds of sorrow

Spits of rain scatter
Littered
Through the woeful past

Licks of flame dazzle
Dotted
Aganst the fear stained now

Dashes of snow lay
Broken
No fresh start I can wish for

Crisp leaves fall
As the wind blows
Through minds of sorrow
No hope for tomorrow.

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  • Psycho Dancer ---
    September 27, 2008
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  • xXxSilentCryxXx
    September 22, 2008

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    Oooh i likedd this.
    Itt was shortt but i dunno i really got a feeling fromm it.

    PS. rememberr mee ?

    anywhoos..
    nicee workk !

    .x.


    • Psycho Dancer ---
      September 23, 2008
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      i do remember you!

      i don't really write anymore, wish i could - just come on here to check messages and stuff

      thanks for the comment though

      x

      • xXxSilentCryxXx
        September 26, 2008
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        ahh yeah me too youu knoww.
        every few months ill uploadd something.
        but yeah.

        your welcome ! x

  • Psycho Dancer ---
    August 20, 2007
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    wow, thanks, do you really think this is good ?
    x.


  • Summer Dawn
    August 19, 2007

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    beautiful poem.
    beautiful dashes of imagery
    effort applied into this very well!!

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