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Paint Myself Black



I could paint myself black
With jagged edges and gaping holes
As crimson red fills them in
And deep blue slowly soothes the edges
While golden yellow works its way into my soul.


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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    June 18, 2007

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    Excellent

    This is one of the richest deepest small short quick poems I have ever read. any ways just great depth and flow through out this poem the imagery with the colors are just awesome. excellent work here sis and very well penned. Bro


  • forwardfalling
    June 16, 2007
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    Well done

    Well written.

    kind of a Morbid write.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    May 5, 2007
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    Well done. A sorrowful write.
    Gaylene


  • Lady Australis silver member
    May 5, 2007
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    cute lol
    well done
    <3


  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    May 4, 2007

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    In the second line, you should have a colour!!!!

    That's all I got to say bitch I waffle ya till I'm moldy

    MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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