Dance in petals
dripping color
to soothe the senses,
and speak in whisper,
for, this heart pounds
as secret is storm
underneath silken dreams.
You silence my whimper
with gentle hands
to soften my sigh-
strumming an inclination
to quench this thirst
in vibrant rejuvenation.
Lie with me in the moment
and subdue this pulsating passion
in subtle curve to caress
Don't think...
just wander
these endless possibilities
to set the sun in satisfaction
and fade the stars
with the glow in these eyes.
♥♥
Author notes
'O love is the crooked thing,
There is nobody wise enough
To find out all that is in it,
For he would be thinking of love
Till the stars had run away'...Yeats
A contest entry
- Quote Me Love.... by Cannonsfire.
1000 points, ended May 5, 2007, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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You silence my whimper
with gentle hands
to soften my sigh-
strumming an inclination
to quench this thirst
in vibrant rejuvenation.
Lie with me in the moment
Just beautiful
Rick
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Beautiful write You do love poems soooooooooo well my friend. Wishing you all the best in this contest! s
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Wonderful take on the Yeats quote. I like the lines "... Don't think... just wander these endless possibilities ..." best. Good luck in the contest. ~Jim
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Oh my gosh!!! This is soooooo beautiful sweety. Your words here are amazing and so soft and sensual. I think this is truly one of my favorite poems I have ever seen you write. WOW. Just absolutely stunning poem here hon. Good luck in the contest!!
Love,
~Krys~
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Such a sweet glow moves you pen as stream in ease of finding ocean, soft in glow and purple in peace of what is now and always will be...so beautiful feathered goddess of moistened poetry
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This is just glorious, a few sighes escaped my lips reading this. Thank you so much for a wonderful entry
Love, C
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