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How Do I Live Without You

The lack of your presence

Would make me feel cold inside
Nothing would ever seem right
How could I go on?
Knowing you're not in my reach
In my arms you must stay
Or this heart withers away


Each day passion is rekindled
With blazing fire
Touched by your warmth
Never the same again
Pleading like a fool
Don't leave I beg of you


Down on my knees
Giving you everything
Heart, soul, blood
These veins we share
Cherished and adored


With this embrace
Melodies continue
Soft music
That touches the soul


Without you,
Efforts would be wasted

Tossed aside
Two hearts, left bleeding


Treasures waiting
Eternally sealed
Hearts mended
Forevermore

 

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    February 8, 2008

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    This is a lovely background. I couldn't help but think of Trisha Yearwood while reading this. Great write, best of luck in the contest.


    whisper


  • SarahEatsAirplane
    June 22, 2007
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    awww this is so sweet! it really made me feel from your point of view!


  • TwiztidMaggot
    June 21, 2007

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    wow.

    this is beautiful! I love the lines Down on my knees
    Giving you everything
    Heart, soul, blood
    These veins we share
    Cherished and adored

    it's like me and my bf... good job!!!!!!!! I also like

    Without you,
    Efforts would be wasted
    Tossed aside
    Two hearts, left bleeding

    those lines really stuck out to me! good job!!!!!! I love the emotion put in this poem! I love it! keep it up! good luck!

    Crimson


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    June 5, 2007

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    Awesomely done, Kari
    I feel these feelings for him so deeply; it's as if you looked into my heart and read the words there though I personally don't have the muse to express it
    Thank you for sharing your heart and soul upon the page
    I think this is a wonderful write

  • this is really an amazing poem keep up the awesome work


  • dark fairie69
    May 4, 2007

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    Awsome.

    This write was amazing I could totally relate to the "The lack of your presence would make me cold inside" My boyfriend lives one hundred miles away, and I don't know what to do when he is gone. Great write!!


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    May 4, 2007

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    I read you song - poem while listening to the real song " how do I live without you ".
    I found your words to fit the song perfectly.
    What you wrote is thruly very beautiful.
    Thank you for being a part of my first contest.

    Manyblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce

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