Lingering in the aftermath of love,
The day smiles upon all that we do.
My head is clouded; I am traveling above,
My life is wonderful because of you.
I saw you in the morning by the tree,
I saw you in the daytime in the rain,
I saw you in the evening by the creek,
I saw you and you erased all my pain.
Loving you comes so easy to my heart.
Trusting you is easier than I thought.
Knowing you would never tear us apart
I offer my soul to end your soul’s drought.
Good night my love I am waiting for you,
For all eternity I’ll spend with you.
Author notes
i tried to write this age appropriate for you.
A contest entry
- Why? 'Cause I'm in love. by Whispered Secrets.
550 points, ended May 14, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I love the third stanza.
Loving you comes so easy to my heart.
Trusting you is easier than I thought.
Knowing you would never tear us apart
I offer my soul to end your soul’s drought.
Thanks for putting the poem age appropriate, I apologize if you had written something you thought was better.
I think this is a really great poem...wow...I dunno, I believe true love comes easily when it's the right person.
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Beautiful! I'm again speechless from your poem. I love how your words just express things so deeply! Wonderful job! I love it!
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