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Point Wise

If points were magic
like little wishes you could make come true,
I'd start by turning them into brain cells
to make all the brain dead minds of immoral genius
who have power
see something more and meaningful
than their own greed.

Then I'd take a few
and turn them into food
for feeding those who have none,
before sharing others among so many of poor health
giving them a reason to finally have hope.

Finally,
with any I had left to squander,
it would be for something
frivolous and silly, my personal reward,
a pure indulgence of my lusts,
no I won't be stupid to say what,
but what the heck,
if all the rest were fat and happy,
at least I could collect something for my noble gestures,
in the shape of a nice shiny trophy of some lurid texture,
representing the crowning moment of fulfilling my own secret desires,
quitely placing upon my memory's shelf,
having only a smile and wink to explain its victory.

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  • individuality gold member
    May 16, 2007

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    lol i just gave ten thousand away about an hour ago they keep building up and i keep kicking them about.


    • penman gold member
      May 16, 2007
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      Oh sure remind me of that. Thanks for reading.


  • Desire gold member
    May 5, 2007

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    Wow!!

    Powerful piece penned and that is why I pick Your brain
    Loved this one Sweetness and the message You send~
    You know how to tell it like it is

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and my Love~ Desire~*~


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    May 4, 2007

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    Standing in Applause!!

    Much thought put into this piece. (Must be those brain cells. ) I just loved this. Now, if only we could use our points this way... Well done. Best of luck in this contest. ~Pamela

  • well done

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