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All Alone

Alone in solitude,
Alone in loneliness,
Alone in this place,
That called a life.
This girl is hurting.
Hurting so badly.
No body loves her,
And no one ever will.
Her heart was ripped apart,
Twice in one night.
It now lies,
In a rubble at her feet.
She has no heart,
No feelings.
She is done.
Never again.
Alone in solitude,
Alone in loneliness.
This is the life I live.

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  • Gypsy-Girl
    April 14, 2009

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    I like the poem but the backround just dosn't match. But the poem is awesome! i couldn't stop reading it!