In your eyes
In your blue eyes I see my life,
how it is and how it's been.
In your eyes I see the hope
of a forgotten yesterday and a new tomorrow.
In your eyes I see the ocean and it's life.
I see the world staring back at me.
How it is and how it should be.
In your eyes I see the sky,
it's amazing blues with a dreamy tint.
In your eyes I see tomorrow,
the good days; forgotten sorrows.
In your eyes I find hope stareing back at me,
because looking in your eyes
I know everything will be okay.
I hate the way
I hate the way you look at me
like everything is going to be okay.
I hate the way you speak to me
with that sweetest tone you use with me.
I hate the way you hug me
when all else seems like nothing
I hate how much you mean to me
when you can't even seen its true.
I hate the way you become so distant
when I just want you close
I hate the way your smell lingers
long after you have gone.
I hate the way you make me smile
and how you make me frown
I hate the way you make me feel
because I know you don't know it's real.
I hate the way you make me smile
when the next day you make me cry.
I hate the way I like you so
when you don't even know.
Please tell me what you think
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I love these
They don't get less confusing as you get older either, let me tell you. At 21 they still confuse the hell out of me, saying one thing and doing another. I've missed you! 
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nice
wow those r two great poems...nice contrasting of two different ways of how he makes u feel
n i agree with you... guys confuse me too lol
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arrrrgggg, what a contrast. i like this, the poems work well parallel
good job, zemër. I enjoyed this. It reminded me of particular events in my own life, lol, which is always good b/c that's what a writer wants to evoke...no?
Love you, precious
Neri
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awww... these are a very sweet couple of poems... I like the title you posted for both of them!!! Great job!!! Keep up the great work!!!
Hugs,
Beth -
hate the way you become so distant
when I just want you close
right now, i am in something just like this and i am the one who wants to be close, keep it flowing -
awww you've done very well in expressing yourself here I like how you've combined the two poems..clever!!! Guys....are tricky to understand sometimes
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