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The Miser

A greedy sniveling hog
hoards them;
gathering the points up,
stuffed inside a mattress
to await further use.

Years of winnings,
unfathomable hours of toil
represented by this mass
of seemingly fruitless earnings,
laying barren of employment.

Having amassed such a treasury,
everything ripe for picking
lying at their fingertips,
so many things to choose from-
might as well just buy out this site. 

Author notes

I'm such an indecisive person-I'd probably just end up earning all these points, letting them pile up. If I could do anything with them, and I had enough, I might as well just take over AP! Muahahahaha!!!!!! *ahem* sorry......

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  • trumpetfalcon silver member
    May 17, 2007

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    ~hee, hee~

    I like this - it makes me giggle (as per the beginning of my comment ). I have, also, found myself, many a time, in this same predicament: what is a person to do with all of those points?

    Thanks for brightening my day!

    CC: You might consider changing your semicolon into a comma, as semicolons generally separate two independent clauses, and also, putting a space in between your last word and the dash.

  • cute and ambituous


    • Zephyr Aryn
      May 3, 2007
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      I couldn't help it. Everyone else is doing poems about noble things to do, and I just couldn't write another one, adding onto the growing pile. I like to be different anyways. It's not always the easiest route to take, but who says I'd want it that way?