exchange
them for money,
point for pound or dollar,
go on a shopping spree for fun
coming home with a new fashion wardrobe
that really makes me look so chic
so every curve will smile,
clothes I will not
exchange
kisses
a point for one
I’ll build up the numbers,
in the thousands of gazillions
smooches for everyone that I adore,
sharing the wealth with sweet sugar
and comment to get more
of those priceless
kisses
treasure
chest of my points,
if they could be useful
to end poverty and sadness,
bring a smile to the face of the homeless
and a blessing to all lost souls
I would give them away,
life is the point,
treasure
Author notes
Triple Rictameters
A contest entry
- What is the point (24 hours) by Idle Mind Wondering.
1050 points, ended May 5, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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YAY
i am not sure what to say
so i think i will just say
YAY
LOL

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I like the form

well done



